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My Painful Obsessions
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My Painful Obsessions |
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Nick_UK Junior Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 10 |
Having read Poutprincess' "Skin", I remembered this... An old one.. My Painful Obsessions Daylight is dawning Crawling out of my hole Dirty little slave boy Pray's she won't leave him alone Screaming for pain Delivered with a lick of her tongue Whipping the skin Feel like my soul's come undone My painful obsessions They're all but my own Cut so deep Hurt like you'll never know Midnight 'til morning Strung out naked and cold Body is yearning Mistress Evil, calling me on Fallen little angel Poison the only love I've known Tear out my heart Feel it beat, this twisted love My painful obsessions Draw me to her call Washed up and dried out Waiting for the rain to fall |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Nick...what would happen if you and poutprincess got together? Nothing? Hmmm..makes me wonder. Good job. Hardrock |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
ah yes fj, this is very good!! i love going back and pulling out the old ones. good one to pick to dust off!!! your imagery here is rather superb. you paint pictures with your words. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
*LOL* Nick, Hardrock does have a point!! and of course i loved this...great work...and bold. Ah, sweet tempting taboo! Look forward to reading more from you. |
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