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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
well hmmm i haven't posted anything in the past week i believe...been a bit stressed...so i figured i would come 'vent'...so here goes with the unedited.. ~Your Words~ you're hurting me with loving words you're healing me it's not deserved sweet in every action no physical attraction sweet nothings whispered a gentle kiss delivered it's not supposed to be this way you're not supposed to want to stay don't want to be alone i just want you to say it but i would never tell you i can only pray it only three little words that i so love to hate i just need to hear them so i can see my fate illness in the mind sadness clouded heart i just want to hide when these feelings start i just want you to say them those words i love to hate please just say the words with no debate three short words are my only fear because 'i love you' i hate to hear Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ohhh... lovely piece  Last verse was very good!"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
OOOhhhhh... I'm so happy to read your stuff again, haven't heard from you in a while This is sooo great, I can totally relate... Not loving a person who says he loves you , wow! It's like what happened to me. The problem is I knew he was a very good guy, but I just couldn't bring myself to loving him, but didn't want to send him off as well... Damn! life is so complicated sometimes!!! |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
taramw...thanks for the reply...glad you liked the work,,, LM...ummm are you me? because i think you might be... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This is perfect!!! you're hurting me with loving words you're healing me it's not deserved This really makes me think. My boyfriend talks to me so much about things that are going on. That I dont even see that he is just showing me love by trying to help me. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i feel the same as you wanting to hear "i love you" but not wanting to hear it as well. conflicting emotions, needing both and having no stable ground to stand on. (or at least thats what i take from the poem) very good read here! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Could be... I don't have a clue what the hell is it I really want! I just know he brought me a lot of comfort, because I knew there was somebody who did love me... But is that enough for me to love him? There were so many things about him that did bug me!! And besides, my mind was completely elsewhere if you know what I mean... |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Wow,and again,WOW!! Good write....good to see ya! Thanx!! Click |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Great poem Nikol... Dark Star |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
ERIN...thanks for the reply...i'm glad you liked this...and your bf sounds great Dawn...you make me feel good about myself...thanks LM...i really do think we must be the same person... Click...hehe that made me smile Danni...thanks hun...where are those pants fool?! heheh Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hehe... I thought I have a multiple personality, I just didn't think the other part lives so far, on the other side of the planet!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
only you know what you want. . . you just have to look inside of yourself to see it. . . most of the time though, we don't really want to see ourselves. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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