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The return... |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
The stranger returned to the place he once thought of as home... But now.... He walked through this strange place thinking strange thoughts and feeling strange feelings. His shadow twisted into a sad distortion, just like his mind felt. He thought a thousand conflicting thoughts..... Yet he felt intentful... He looked up into the sky and thought of the place he'd just returned from and a single tear fell, thankfully unseen.... Dreams are the the gateways to making the impossible possible So many words, for the broken heart... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
What a sad image of a man portrayed here... very moving and well written  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Very well written... beautiful and sad. Take care!  |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Woah! Lonelypoet, your poem touched me deeply... Tremendous read! Thanks for sharing ~ Tara ~"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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