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LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

0 posted 2000-08-31 05:21 AM

I don't know if anyone of you guys watching Ally McBeal regularly, I do. Usually it's a nice comic show I really enjoy. Though it handles some really touchy subjects, it has never left me with such an emotional impact as yesterday's episode...
Hope I'm not ruining it for those who do watch the show, but since most of you are from USA as I gather and here we're watching it with some delay... Anyway, I'll stop blabbing. It just triggered some feelings I had to pour out.

Not Without Me

Will I have you?
Don't dare saying never
Maybe not this time
But we have forever...
Not in this life?
Could be, however
We will be back
Wherever, whenever...
Through the eternity
For worse and for better.
Floating through times
As light as a feather.
Life after life
'Till closer than ever.
For you to be mine
I'll be waiting forever.
Just don't go without me
I will endeavour
All, if you promise
We're leaving together.

[This message has been edited by LM (edited 08-31-2000).]

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

1 posted 2000-08-31 05:44 AM

oh this is soooo great!
perfect!
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2000-08-31 08:57 AM

LM. This is great.
I will endeavor all, if we go on together. Great lines. Loved it
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

3 posted 2000-08-31 10:20 AM

Thank you Poutprincess and Kethry for your lovely comments, as usual

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

4 posted 2000-08-31 03:49 PM

This was so damned cute!! I loved it!! Very nice, LM.

((HUGS))

I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break
~Lil OnE~

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

5 posted 2000-08-31 04:48 PM

Great as usual. Keep it up.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

6 posted 2000-09-01 03:16 PM

I enjoyed reading this one, LM..please excuse me if I am not replying to your poem or that of others...I have been trying to reply to those on mine since I am so far behind...and I am dealing with some problems at home that make it very hard for me to enjoy poetry right now...especially if it's about negative situations..so just bear with me I am not ignoring you...or anyone...and you are the only one I am responding to at the moment.
~~soft thanks for responding to mine
Maureen

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

7 posted 2000-09-01 04:06 PM

Thanks for replying

I didn't mean to sound like I'm begging for attention or anything... Just was interested in your opinion. I really understand about not having the time or having more urgent problems to resolve. Thanks for taking the time to reply despite everything. Hope you'll work out your problems soon.

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

8 posted 2000-09-01 05:39 PM

LM, I've no clue what triggered your poem as I don't watch that series (although I know it is shown here, even in Germany

), but it (the poem) is amazing, serene and sad too.

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2000-09-01 11:07 PM

Hi, I don't watch Ally, but I did like this poem, very much.
catalinamoon

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

10 posted 2000-09-02 04:23 AM

Thanks Lotharingia and Catalina

Your replies mean a lot to me guys!
So do everybody else's, thanks for reading my work.
Well I guess I won't be ruining anything by telling what really hapenned there...
Ally and Billie were inlove with eachother since they were 8 years old, they were daiting all through school and highschool. Before collage Billie broke up with Ally and started dating Georgia and eventually married her. Ally never quite got over him (they were working at the same attorney office later) . The new season started with Billie and Georgia's marriage break up, and I was really hoping for Ally and Billie to get back together. But suddenly, Billie discovers he has a brain tumour and he's scheduled for an operation as soon as possible. Not before he has a case he wants to finish together with Ally. While at the court-house, realizing that he still loves Ally very much, Billie suddenly feels really bad and he... dies...

I was just hysterical while watching this episode... That's all the story.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

11 posted 2000-09-02 04:43 AM

This was a really good poem. Personally I dont watch the show. But you have made me realize that maybe that is one show that I am missing out on.

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