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LM
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0 posted 2000-09-01 06:55 PM



The Zodiac

Does Astrology have the answer
To the question "Who are you?"
Check your sign and tell me later
If you found it some way true...

Aries - hot-headed and stubborn
Bright and strives to be ahead
Usually tall and always charming
Hot and passionate in bed...

Taurus is practical and loyal
yes, on him you can depend!
Patient, hardworking, romantic.
To be snobby, though, they tend...

Gemini is bright and witty,
Communicative, likes to learn.
Expressive, playful and flirtatious,
But has a short attention span.

Emotional manipulation
surely is a Cancer's way.
Loving, strond-willed and protective
Home he does prefer to stay.

To be the center of attention
Leo seeks. He is the king!
Truly a leader, warm, creative,
Romantic, social, fun-loving!

Virgo's shy and somewhat nervous
Responsible, perfectionist,
Helpful, critical and keen on details.
Devoted in relationships.

Striving to create a balance
Like scales of justice Libra is
Socially inclined and charming,
Attractive, kind, has drive for peace.

Scorpio - confident and sexy,
Hates to be under control.
Too complex, sometimes secretive.
Passionate and mystical.

Sagittarius wants his freedom.
Philosophic and inteligent.
He is trustworthy, independent,
Athletic, lucky, sometimes blunt.

Capricorn is so ambitious.
He is determined, disciplined,
Realistic, business leader,
Polite, devoted, hard-working.

Individualistic is Aquarius,
Brings new ideas to the world.
Friendly, peace loving, inventive,
Original, by details bored.

And finally there is the Pisces
Intuitive and spiritual.
They're charital, self-sacrificing,
Artistic and emotional.

Found yourself among descriptions?
Tell me now, what's on your mind?
Is there really something to it?
Or is it just a waste of time?


[This message has been edited by LM (edited 09-02-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 LM - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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1 posted 2000-09-01 07:22 PM


LM~~~This is one of the best poems that I have ever read. I really like it. You werent wasting your time (I thought you would like to know since you put that at the end of the poem!). On my mind right now is my boyfriend who is an Aries. Thanks for sharing this!! Do you mind if I print it out?

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


LM
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2 posted 2000-09-01 07:28 PM


Wow... thanks for the reply  
Of course you can print it...

By the way.. I ADORE Aries!!!
You're so lucky!!!!

G. A. Webb
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3 posted 2000-09-01 07:35 PM


Being an Aquarian
I'd say it's true
That's all I have
To say to you
In these words
Which I make ryme
It's really not
A waste of time

LOL!!! That was fun, Thanks!  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


Honeybee
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4 posted 2000-09-01 07:51 PM



Well written and very true indeed!  I am a Virgo and yep, that's me to a tea!      Also, ladies, Scorpio males make the best lovers  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

P.S.  Hey LM what sign are you?


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly


poutprincess
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5 posted 2000-09-02 12:45 PM


im a LEO...and your description rings close to true!
this was great!
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



taramw
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6 posted 2000-09-02 04:02 AM


LOVED ya poem!!    And yeah, described me to a T (Aquarius)  

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

LM
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7 posted 2000-09-02 04:04 AM


Thanks G.A.!
I also have a friend Aquarius, it does sound like her  

Mellisa: So I've heard      
But the horoscope claims it's totally wrong for me  
I am Gemini! What I've wrote is very true for me too, especially about the attention span   LOL

Dawn: I know alllll about Leo's!!! My mom is a Leo and my best male friend  
It's so true about you guys!!!

Thanks for the replies!

Christopher
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8 posted 2000-09-02 04:09 AM


I'm an Aquarian... the "peace loving" part doesn't seem to fit...
LM
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9 posted 2000-09-02 07:48 AM


Hehe  
Christopher, thanks for the reply.
You like battles and chaos?  

Kethry
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10 posted 2000-09-02 08:57 AM


LM
Sometimes it's true for me and sometimes it's not. It depends on the day and what else is happening. However I will say in my philosophic and intelligent way that I liked your poem very much.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

ilph
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11 posted 2000-09-02 09:00 AM



right on!..go cancer!

G. A. Webb
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12 posted 2000-09-02 12:46 PM


Just a side note LM, I'm not a woman. I am all man. FYI, my name is Greg.

Take care!  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


LM
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13 posted 2000-09-02 12:51 PM


Hehe
I know YOU'RE a male, but my friend isn't  
Haha!

catalinamoon
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14 posted 2000-09-02 09:19 PM


This was too cute, and fun and pretty accurate, overall. I think there is a lot to astrology, but the generic overviews are not usually accurate enough without adding in the other factors. That said, my love is Aquarius, and he is SO EXACTLY the picture of an Aquarius, its phenomenal. I am a Leo, and never felt like I wanted to be the center of attention, but as I get older, well..
Anyway I sure am romantic, so that part fits.
I also know a lot of Aries that are through and through textbook Aries.
Interesting and fun. Thanks
Sandra

qtpieelmo
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15 posted 2000-09-03 03:00 AM


Yep I really believe in horoscopes & stuff, mine are usually very close to true! I'm a virgo & my boyfriend is a saggitarius. So I can say for us the signs are very correct to who we really are! Cool Idea LOVE ELMO  
LM
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16 posted 2000-09-03 05:11 AM


Thanks you Sandra and qtpie  
Aries are just... whooooooooh! I love them... both my uncle and my biggest love are Aries... and they appear so similar to me sometimes, even the way of speach...

Sven
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17 posted 2000-09-03 10:28 PM


As a Virgo, I would have to say that you got most of it. . . but I would be the first to tell you that I and NOT shy!!  LOL  

Excellent!!

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


sonjes
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18 posted 2000-09-04 06:17 AM


AS a Libra, I must say that the description leaves a little to be desired...and I am married to a Pisces and THAT is nothing like him...hehe! NOthing could be further from the truth.
  BUT, the Gemini...now I have known a Gemini and let me tell you...THAT is him to a tee!!!!  

LM
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19 posted 2000-09-04 08:04 AM


Sven: Haha! Could be, I have Virgo friends and some are shy and some not...
Thanks for the reply  

Sonjes: Tell me about it...  
I'm a Gemini!
About Pisces, is it good or bad that the description doesn't match?  

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