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poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

0 posted 2000-08-31 12:37 PM


You're shadow stained
Better stay out the sun
Don't want you to fade
Cause the heat
Is eating me alive
And I'm looking
For shelter
I've got sunrise eyes
And midnight secrets
And the garden of Eden
Can't compare
To the petals
In my pocket
Who told you bliss
Started with
"The birds and the bees"?
I can prove them wrong
Baby
It all starts with me
Their flowers may be
Sweetly scented
But I got a poppy seed smile
Drink that drug
From my lips
I might be poison
But,
Come on Boy
Get addicted.

  
  < !signature-->

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos




[This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 08-31-2000).]

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LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

1 posted 2000-08-31 01:41 PM


Oooohhhhhhh....feeling little devilish today, huh? Great poem, how I wish someone would get addicted to me...
poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
2 posted 2000-08-31 01:53 PM


LM: LOL...my muse has been VERY flirty lately...thank you for replying!
and hey, if you do get someone addicted, let me know how you did it!  


"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



JSage
Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91
Nashua, NH USA
3 posted 2000-08-31 02:32 PM


Another brilliant piece of artwork there, Dawn... how you do it, I don't know.  I used to write some exciting stuff... I need my muse back.  

Anyway.. I loved it!  And I'm addicted... to your poetry.

-Jes

poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
4 posted 2000-08-31 03:59 PM


Jes: geesh! what a very flattering reply that was......in my eyes you are exciting!
looks like we've found fans in one another!
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
5 posted 2000-08-31 05:21 PM


I can buy a bag of these drugs from you, strawberry flavoured.

Dawn, this one is hot and I melting here with your words, wonderfully written.  

"I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy

sonjes
Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
6 posted 2000-08-31 09:59 PM


YOu paint such a picture with your words...wickedly sweet and intoxicating. You almost remind me of a siren(?) is that what I am trying to think of? (I AM SOOOO TIRED)
  Ya know, beautiful voices, wooing men to their island only to ...whatever!!!!
  Needless to say, I enjoyed your poem immensely!

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 2000-09-01 12:23 PM


Borderlines!!  Clever girl!!!   This was good..  

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
8 posted 2000-09-01 12:33 PM


Drugs are good!  I mean BAD!  Yesssss, very bad!! Ahahah lalalal.
(Twitching violently) Hehe, yess, precious drugs…

I imagine the boys are lined up for miles waiting to toke on that drug…hehe  

shagirl
Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 18
southbeach, usa.
9 posted 2000-09-01 02:02 AM


ooooh....
a good one.
heheh.


From fairest creatures we desire increase,
That thereby beauty's rose might never die,
But as the riper should by time decease,
His tender heir

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

10 posted 2000-09-01 03:26 AM


LOL! Hey, this is terrific!!    

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
11 posted 2000-09-01 05:08 AM


brian: *smile*...was told to never take lollies from strangers....but if they are strawberry..well i might be talked into it! hahah..thanks for replying

sonjes: yes, you are right, its called a siren....hahahahh.....thank you soo much for the reply!

Isis: hehhe..thank you for letting me test the limits...i'll be a good girl next time, promise!  

Deranger: *blush*...hahaha..well if they are lined up, then they are at the wrong darned door! thank you!

shagirl: thank you! im glad you enjoyed!

taramw: im glad you found this terrific, because i was feeling really terrific when i wrote it!

THANKS EVERYONE!!< !signature-->

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos




[This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 09-01-2000).]

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
12 posted 2000-09-01 05:55 AM


Yum!
Yum!
Yum!


Can I have a sex change and get addicted too?
I love it love it DO!


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
13 posted 2000-09-01 05:59 AM


lotharingia:
heheh...(no sex changes needed here, we take you as you are!)  
Thank you for all those "yums"!
geesh, im  getting an ego here today!
~Dawn< !signature-->

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos




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Forrest Cain
Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA
14 posted 2000-09-02 08:04 PM


This was a fun read. It does feel good to
be alive and laughing. Thanks.

forrest

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
15 posted 2000-09-02 09:08 PM


Wow, Dawn, I LOVE this. And I feel a little like that with my long distance man. Every now and then the nasties takes over and I want to start ranting and saying I need so much MORE than this.. Anyway, getting too personal here..This was a great poem..
Sandra

boji stone
Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62
USA
16 posted 2000-09-02 09:26 PM


this is sassy....love the words and I like the
beat, very Kewl! indeed!

*S*
Z

poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
17 posted 2000-09-03 01:31 AM


Forrest: im very happy to bring a bit more fun into your life..thanks!

Sandra:thank you!...oh i know the "nasties" you talk about...and boy when they take over they REALLY take over!  

boji stone: i havent been called sassy in years! thank you!!

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
18 posted 2000-09-03 10:33 PM


whoa!!  This one came from out of nowhere. . . ok Dawn, fess up. . . what's your muse been doing lately??  lol  

Great poem!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
19 posted 2000-09-04 04:47 AM


Sven: LOL....ive got the sweetest little muse, nothing "suspect" going on here!  
thank you for the reply!
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
20 posted 2000-09-04 08:58 AM


~Dawn,
Ive never know a person not to
get addicted to you!!
But I do like your flirty manner..LOL
Beth~


~Cherie~

poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
21 posted 2000-09-04 09:11 AM


OH Ree you sweetheart!
*smile*
Thank you!!
~Ataensic

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



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