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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia 
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You're shadow stained Better stay out the sun Don't want you to fade Cause the heat Is eating me alive And I'm looking For shelter I've got sunrise eyes And midnight secrets And the garden of Eden Can't compare To the petals In my pocket Who told you bliss Started with "The birds and the bees"? I can prove them wrong Baby It all starts with me Their flowers may be Sweetly scented But I got a poppy seed smile Drink that drug From my lips I might be poison But, Come on Boy Get addicted.   < !signature-->"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oooohhhhhhh....feeling little devilish today, huh? Great poem, how I wish someone would get addicted to me... |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
LM: LOL...my muse has been VERY flirty lately...thank you for replying! and hey, if you do get someone addicted, let me know how you did it! "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
Another brilliant piece of artwork there, Dawn... how you do it, I don't know. I used to write some exciting stuff... I need my muse back.  Anyway.. I loved it! And I'm addicted... to your poetry. -Jes |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Jes: geesh! what a very flattering reply that was......in my eyes you are exciting! looks like we've found fans in one another! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I can buy a bag of these drugs from you, strawberry flavoured. Dawn, this one is hot and I melting here with your words, wonderfully written. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
YOu paint such a picture with your words...wickedly sweet and intoxicating. You almost remind me of a siren(?) is that what I am trying to think of? (I AM SOOOO TIRED) Ya know, beautiful voices, wooing men to their island only to ...whatever!!!! Needless to say, I enjoyed your poem immensely! Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Borderlines!! Clever girl!!! This was good..  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Drugs are good! I mean BAD! Yesssss, very bad!! Ahahah lalalal. (Twitching violently) Hehe, yess, precious drugs… I imagine the boys are lined up for miles waiting to toke on that drug…hehe  |
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shagirl Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 18southbeach, usa. |
ooooh.... a good one. heheh. From fairest creatures we desire increase, That thereby beauty's rose might never die, But as the riper should by time decease, His tender heir |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
LOL! Hey, this is terrific!! "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
brian: *smile*...was told to never take lollies from strangers....but if they are strawberry..well i might be talked into it! hahah..thanks for replying sonjes: yes, you are right, its called a siren....hahahahh.....thank you soo much for the reply! Isis: hehhe..thank you for letting me test the limits...i'll be a good girl next time, promise!  Deranger: *blush*...hahaha..well if they are lined up, then they are at the wrong darned door! thank you! shagirl: thank you! im glad you enjoyed! taramw: im glad you found this terrific, because i was feeling really terrific when i wrote it! THANKS EVERYONE!!< !signature--> "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Yum! Yum! Can I have a sex change and get addicted too? I love it love it DO! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
lotharingia: heheh...(no sex changes needed here, we take you as you are!)  Thank you for all those "yums"! geesh, im getting an ego here today! ~Dawn< !signature--> "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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Forrest Cain Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 306Chas.,W.V. USA |
This was a fun read. It does feel good to be alive and laughing. Thanks. forrest |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, Dawn, I LOVE this. And I feel a little like that with my long distance man. Every now and then the nasties takes over and I want to start ranting and saying I need so much MORE than this.. Anyway, getting too personal here..This was a great poem.. Sandra |
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boji stone Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62USA |
this is sassy....love the words and I like the beat, very Kewl! indeed! *S* Z |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Forrest: im very happy to bring a bit more fun into your life..thanks! Sandra:thank you!...oh i know the "nasties" you talk about...and boy when they take over they REALLY take over! boji stone: i havent been called sassy in years! thank you!! "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
whoa!! This one came from out of nowhere. . . ok Dawn, fess up. . . what's your muse been doing lately?? lol  Great poem!! ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Sven: LOL....ive got the sweetest little muse, nothing "suspect" going on here!  thank you for the reply! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Dawn, Ive never know a person not to get addicted to you!! But I do like your flirty manner..LOL Beth~ ~Cherie~ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
OH Ree you sweetheart! *smile* Thank you!! ~Ataensic "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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