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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2000-08-31 07:47 AM


Feeling gone,
I’ll linger with my pin pricks,
Freshly made,
Lemonade
Washing blood from shallow sticks,
Then redone.

Touching not,
Sensations have gone away,
No shiver,
No quiver,
Heat and cold have not a play,
Feeling not;

Small warm red pools, freshly made.

Gloom 2000


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poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-08-31 09:44 AM


sorry, i just edited out my original reply cause it was too vague...i emailed you to ask the question i wanted to ask you about this....and to praise it too!
i REALLY liked this.

~Dawn< !signature-->

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos






[This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 08-31-2000).]

MMoonchild
Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
2 posted 2000-08-31 12:57 PM


finger feelings
yours
to warm
against the heating
of her form
forgot what the patterning was here so I will give up for now..you get the idea though *w
M


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