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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Feeling gone, I’ll linger with my pin pricks, Freshly made, Lemonade Washing blood from shallow sticks, Then redone. Touching not, Sensations have gone away, No shiver, No quiver, Heat and cold have not a play, Feeling not; Small warm red pools, freshly made. Gloom 2000 |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
sorry, i just edited out my original reply cause it was too vague...i emailed you to ask the question i wanted to ask you about this....and to praise it too! i REALLY liked this. ~Dawn< !signature--> "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
finger feelings yours to warm against the heating of her form forgot what the patterning was here so I will give up for now..you get the idea though *w M |
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