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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
the other day i silently begged him to take me to take all my littleness my small everythingness to gather me up in his hands and handle me so delicately but he could not hear me he could not read the look in my eyes as i walked by him broken hearted i got down on the knees of my mind and prepared to meet the eyes of the next passerby. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This has me wondering who he might be. Someone nice or maybe someone not so nice? Hmmm... A brilliant poem, silentsky, but I hope it's not about how you feel and you're OK!?  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
"i silently begged him to take me to take all my littleness my small everythingness" love the way you worded this! very good! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
"to gather me up in his hands and handle me so delicately" Wow... amazing writing... Good job! Take care! |
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