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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia 
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I've got the '90's in my rythym And his 20's against my swinging hips And the dancing is getting heated A flash fire of painted nails and glittered lips Pounding vibrations shaking Sweaty flesh pulsating Boy, His party is raving The music is rising up my thighs Gonna shake this sensation loose The coloured lights dazzle my eyes I got a sway he can't refuse Pounding vibrations shaking Sweaty flesh pulsating Boy, His party is raving He's got his hands on my groove disco glimmered bourbon kissed And I, the flow of whiskey in my move Dancing, trancing , liquored bliss Pounding vibrations shaking Sweaty flesh pulsating Boy, His party is raving Come on Boy Lets get this party raving. "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
I want to be at that party with you Dawn! liquored bliss! love it! -Jes |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I love this, princess. It's got swing. Really naughty too  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
This is superb! Yummy yummy yummy! Yessss, very naughty… Kinda has a retro flare to it…cool. Nice quote BTW! Lalalala! ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Jes: come on over girl...we've been waiting for you! lotharingia: hehe...naughty...nah...not me!  THANK YOU BOTH!< !signature--> Deranger: you slipped in on me unaware..so im editing you in! LOL Did you mention yummy? (Darn, knew i should have sent out more invitations!) thank you for watching...oops..replying! LOL "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
What a cool party! Just what the doctor prescribed!!! Cool poem too! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Brian hands the DJ a cd. Joy Divison sombrely rises from the speakers, place goes dead..DJ tosses Brian's CD away. Brian hates raves happy music blah, oh whiskey... three glasses later BRian is dancing semi naked on the stage. Cool poem Dawn, I am going to pratice my dance steps. REally loved this. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
hehe...I looks so silly dancing in my chair...but can't you hear that boogity beat??? Really, I liked this.  Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And a good time was had by all.. Love this one, Dawn. catalinamoon |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
LM: you are always welcome to come join my parties! thank you so much! Brian: NO JOY DIVISION...."think happy thoughts, think happy thoughts"...three glasses of whiskey to get you dancing semi-naked on stage?...hmmm...me thinks you need more to drink.... sonjes: there is no way you could look half as silly as old Bri up there....then again, how much whiskey have YOU had to drink? LOL catalinamoon: im glad everyone had a good time..i think once in a while we all here deserve to cut loose!! Thanks for replying everybody!!  "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Dawn, Im bringin' this to the top baby.. Girl, you need a spankin'!!! Keep this writting up 99~ ~Cherie~ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
....oh goodness, what id do for a spanking right now! LOL thanks for bringing this one back from the dead...told you all that fairy dust makes me giddy,Titania! ~ataensic "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
img src="http://netpoets.net/img/ic13.gif"  You  You Kethry< !signature--> "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 09-06-2000).] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh yes, now i can see the graphics.....love ya girl! love this response! signature--> "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 09-06-2000).] |
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