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shagirl Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 18southbeach, usa. |
I was once a little girl then i grew up and i am still a little girl My life echoes the waves of insanity left to me as a b i r th day gift by the one i least cherish dark disturbing night with Echo's flight Death reflects it light in my eyes Payne etches its nails in my throat until i am left speaking my epitaph Spin me a song or two oh pianoman give me a sad tune or maybe a slow one Add a little spice and everything nice or little deep inspiration Oh pianoman give me a song to know myself with that explains away my sorrow till the day ends my life is described beneath a soda bottle cap... sorry try again later Deliver me the head of Prince Charming for he hopped town after refusing to pay his alimony to Sleeping beauty he knocked up Cinderella and Snow White is left crying since he stole her prize-winning cow Hunt down Prince Charming show him the hounds of Baskerville and the Headless horseman Shall he find Charion at the end of the rainbow or better yet have him find a doe-eyed beauty who robs him blind From fairest creatures we desire increase, That thereby beauty's rose might never die, But as the riper should by time decease, His tender heir |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
your poem expresses a strong feeling within me at the moment. im trying not to let it eat me up and to take care of the little girl within me. write me an email some time. maybe we could help each other out. shira (blackeyedwitch@yahoo.com) |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
I love this. I really love this. So raw and expressive in a very unique way. I know the feelings expressed there as well.... -Jes |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
“my life is described beneath a soda bottle cap... sorry try again later” GRRR, don’t you hate that? You shell out a buck and all you get is some lousy carbonated beverage and this stupid message!!! Ok, that line was kinda funny (Sorry, sick sense of humor) , but this line sends those cool shivers down my spine! “until i am left speaking my epitaph” Yummy stuff! Keep it up! ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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