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For Andrew Dreams |
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Kirsty New Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 8Australia |
For Andrew Dreams If dreams were boats, I'd sail away If dreams were books I'd read all day If dreams were secrets Oh, what I could tell If dreams were perfume How sweet they'd smell If dream were castles I'd have two If dreams were wings I'd fly to you If dreams were love I'd need many a heart But dreams are walls That keeps us apart "Kiss you children goodnight even if they are asleep" |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This is a great poem. I love the way it rhymes. I especially became fond of this last two lines. But dreams are walls That keeps us apart Great work  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
Welcome to Dark Passions! I hope you like it here as much as I do. I love your poem. Very well written. Can't wait for the next one. Best Wishes, Dee  "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
your poem is beautiful... especially the last couple of lines... there is a lot of depth in the idea you present within this poem... thanks for sharing welcome to dark passions. yours, shira |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kristy, What a wonderful first post. I hope all your dreams come true here at passions. Welcome. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Kirsty, welcome to passions (don't remember if I welcomed you already or not...) Wonderful poem, enjoyed it so much! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Welcome Welcome, Welcome!!!~ "If dreams were wings I'd fly to you",....Ooh, I love this line. So many great ones here. A splendid first post. Hope to read more of you. Take care. *Peace. |
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Kirsty New Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 8Australia |
Thanks Everybody for the welcome. It is nice to have found somewhere to place my poetry so I can share with everyone. "Kiss you children goodnight even if they are asleep" |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Welcome to PASSIONS!!! What an entrance you make... May your stay be long and healthy. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Hello and Welcome! I usually reply in some half conscious, half sane fashion, but since I don’t want to scare you off, I’ll try to keep this one low-keyed. Here goes! I really like this line, there is a lot of truth to it; If dreams were secrets Oh, what I could tell So great work and welcome, you might take this time to tell us something about yourself at the “Dark Passions Get-to-know-each-other” thread. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
This is really a nice poem. I can relate to this poem pretty well. Anyway, good job, and welcome to (dark) passions. |
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shagirl Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 18southbeach, usa. |
this poem of yours is really nice. welcome to dark passion! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome!! Lovely first post, it IS nice to find a place you like to share your writing isn't it? *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Kirsty New Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 8Australia |
I can assure you all it is nice to get some good feedback. There are many more poems wherre that one came from. I am pleased that you all enjoyed, and thanks again for the welcomes. "Kiss you children goodnight even if they are asleep" |
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