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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Empty skies where the stars used to be. They'd shine for anyone else, but they don't shine for me. Ever since you went away... ever since you went away from me. You were the best thing I ever had, I'll never find another love like that. I'm left in this lifeless world, I'm fading in shades of gray. All the colors in my life were slowly sucked away. I'm sinking ever deeper into a place that's cold and black. I can't believe I've lost you and you're never coming back. You have the stars to lead you through, to help make things bright... I've got nothing left, my life is black as night. Now after all this time, you think I understand the way you feel. I'm only thinking about you and me... something that will never again be real. Something that just can't be. Now it's driving you away, I just wish you'd come back someday. Where did I go wrong? Tell me, what did I do? I have nothing now, because I don't have you. I'm torn apart inside, you scarred me there for life. It's too late to say I'm sorry, too soon to say goodbye. I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break ~Lil OnE~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
OOHHHH!!! amazing hon!!! Be strong! He wasn't good enough for you and you know it! Someone 1000 times better will come along and you'll forget about that sorry-no-good ass! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really amazing expression of your feelings...I have found in every situation that the other party most respects you and wonders what the hell is going on if you are strong and confident...I am not saying breaking up is not painful, I am not say don't feel the pain, I am saying have the confidence that you will make it with or without him...something I didn't do on a few occasions and regretted and something I did on a few occasions and never regretted. James |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Thank you both SO much. I'm glad that SOME people still care. I'm not in the greatest of moods, so you two helped to kinda cheer me up. Thanks again. I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break ~Lil OnE~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This is just so awesome. I have been hurt this way, just two weeks ago. You have to hang in there. I loved this lines. You have the stars to lead you through, to help make things bright... I've got nothing left, my life is black as night. Great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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