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Giving In To It
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Giving In To It |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle 
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She sits cross-legged on the carpet; Wanting, her thoughts numb. Maybe the clamoring wave felt inside will subside to a whisper? Hours, minutes, days, seconds-- Time does not exist. Her stature remains unchanged. Goes unnoticed the receding wave. Hunger, thirst, warmth, cold-- Bodily functions do not exist. Her stature remains unchanged. Goes unheard the whisper. ...chanson~ |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! Deep indeed... but good!  "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Quite a beautiful poem if I must say so myself. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
extremely beautiful... very sad. reminds me of my self at times... thank you for sharing, shira |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
taramnw, Xeonox, shira....thank you for the visit with your kind words. ...chanson~ |
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