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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
I wish I could fly, I wish I could fall. I wish I could jump and just end it all. No more troubles, no more lying. No more yelling, no more crying. I wouldn't be here to be your excuse for raising me wrong with all this abuse. My life is a candle, yearning to burn out. The flame is getting weaker as you scream and shout. I know that you don't love me, and I know you wouldn't care if you went to wake me up one morning and discovered I wasn't there. I think I'll just end it, make good use of this knife. I've had enough of this torturous hell, this miserable thing called life. So farewell to my friends who I know cared for me. I hope you're as happy as I know I will be. But I can't do it. I can't force myself to do it. Oh, but I want to so bad. My blood yearns to be free. But even though there's nothing more that I want, I can't. I just want to fly. Give me wings and set me free. Let me fly. < !signature--> "I've fallen asleep, slept so sound. Fallen so fast, I missed the ground" ~Lil OnE~ [This message has been edited by Lil OnE (edited 08-28-2000).] |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
I just thought I’d reply quickly incase the mod locks/deletes this! Life can be harsh, can’t it? If you want to talk about it, email me. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This is too sad of a poem. I hope this is not an actual event. But besides that it is awesome in its own crazy way.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
hey i know how it feels to be this way...im sure a lot of people do...but i really liked the ending..Dont do it i say! All i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey Lil, I really hate reading such dark thoughts from you... Life can be beautiful and it will be! Please don't give up and don't do anything drastic! Love , LM. |
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