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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-08-28 01:33 PM


Come to me and hold my hand
Come to me and be my man
Now's the time to make a stand
Take a chance on where we land

Open your arms wide to me
Open then to what will be
To my heart you hold the key
Soon our love will set us free

Cross with me o'er sands of time
Cross with me to life sublime
Offer me your cup of wine
Show to me your heart's design

You alone can make this right
You alone can change the night
Bring to it a spark of light
Love me now with all your might..

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poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-08-28 01:38 PM


"open your arms wide to me
open then to what will be
to my heart you hold the key
soon our love will set us free"

"you alone can make this right
you alone can change this night
bring to it a spark of light
love me now with all your might"

this is a very beautiful, heartfelt plea...i dont see how he could resist these words..and certainly dont see how he could resist you!!

~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-08-28 01:47 PM


I'm not sure if love is simple or complex.
When it arrives it just keeps coming after you.
If its not there it seems to keep running from you no matter your actions...James

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

3 posted 2000-08-28 03:38 PM


*sigh*... Beauty!  
And I loved the repeating words in each stanza!

"Cross with me o'er sand of time
Cross with me to life sublime
Offer me your cup of wine
Show to me your heart's design"

Superb!

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