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Whispers |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA 
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Feather whispers, nibble gently at my periphery. Whispy scents of hushed voices flit about my mind's edge. Malignant uttterings concealed in benign mutterings. Suppressed whispers gnaw dilengently at my once, well-trained sentience. Deceiving my suburban reality with smoothly wicked circumlocution. Coniving locquacity worming through pedestrian comfort Sowing seeds of licention fertilizing the crop of growing iniquity. Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey, this was lost on page two, and I think it is very creative. Interesting use of words. catalinamoon |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
As Cat said interesting, you have always done that, interested the reader, I admire that! Well done  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
I just read this for the first time (not counting when I wrote it), interesting use of words does seem to sum up this poem, indeed. Perhaps next time around I will write something actually worthy of literary consideration...  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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