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LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585


0 posted 2000-08-28 09:44 AM



Destined together

Sorry, but I'll never let you go.
I still got power and hope
So I'll fight hard to reclaim what was mine
And you, my friend will return.

I know wherever you are
This moment you pause and remember
Days we had in past not that far
And part of you surrenders.

That's just me, thinking of you
And the bond between us too strong
To resist the wave of emotions running through
Invisible cable connecting two that belong.

All day I dwell in memmories of us together
Talking, laughing, passing jokes.
Friends used to say we'll get married...
Our lives intertwined,
Your name next to mine
In the book of all mighty locked.

Though we grew far for now
And you're playing out of reach
You miss me but letting your pride somehow
Keep you from doing what you wish.

When you get back and see me again
This wall of anger will fall
I'll smile and ice will melt away
From the heart and now hopeless soul.

  


[This message has been edited by LM (edited 08-28-2000).]

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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-08-28 10:39 AM


very nice poem. May I Suggest that you start with a simple hello and from there I'm sure the love will blossom all over again. Break down the walls before they build up more and more.
LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-08-28 12:47 PM


Thank you Rosebud  
I said Hello... he just doesn't respond so far.

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