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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2000-08-28 05:56 AM


Ravage souls,
Screams rendering darken skies,
Slash velvet,
Starlight spent,
From wanton rips the darkness cries,
With rain cold.

Black nails rake,
Raven beaks welts by your spine,
Agony,
Drawn slowly,
Pain all senses searing blinds,
Feelings slake.

Noiseless cries, conquers the mind.

Gloom


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Xeonox
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1 posted 2000-08-28 04:31 PM


This is really great. The words u use are wonderful. Thank you for sharing.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

SpitFire
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2 posted 2000-08-29 12:47 PM


~This one surely takes you on a ride. What writing! What wording. So rich. Thanx for sharing it. *Peace.
Professor Gloom
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3 posted 2000-08-29 12:15 PM


Thank you, Xeonox & SpitFire,
for your kind responses.

Gloom

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