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A Desirable Goal
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A Desirable Goal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A desirable goal A tender meshing of two personalities and desires, of possiblities and dreams. Wouldn't ask for anything more of my dreams cause I found a shoulder to lean on at last it seems. A sucker for punishment is now thinking perhaps this life is not always so mean. Still wondering why after all I've been thru your attracted to me and I to you. Where will this friendship go? I am more than willing to give every possibility a chance to grow. Not afraid to reach for the stars thinking companionship would be a desirable goal. From that point its possible we have a wonderful chance for new feelings to put on a show. Remaining aware that I must stay cautious lest I move to fast. Still I hope our first embrace is never the last and I see a wonderful opportunity for romance approaching at last. Jameslee@August27,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 08-28-2000).] |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
"A sucker for punishment is now thinking perhaps this life is not always so mean." It's like that when love comes knocking on our door...  Beautiful piece, enjoyed it a lot! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
LM it is beautiful when someone appreciates you...James |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Friend turned lover. That’s the best, since you already know the person well, good luck. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks Deranger...actually I have only known her a few months and I am very interested...she actually chases me a little bit...who could ask for anything more..James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Lovely heartfelt piece hon!! Good luck with your adventure/quest. You deserve some happiness right about now.. Isis *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Great poem, I liked it...I hope you can acheive other goals like that. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Isis and Lonelypoet...I am eagerly seeking happiness and desirous to embrace its beauty...for once in my life I think I deserve happiness...I want it and I need it...happiness come to me and be my friend...I will appreciate and Love you...ha..ha...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
James, good writing here. Hope it works for you and if not come here to cry. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Woah James! Superb poem "Not afraid to reach for the stars" Hmm... so many times people hold back, afraid to reach for those beautiful twinkling things in the sky... if they didn't they'd see they are full of laughter and beauty and just being "alive". I love this poem! I know exactly where you're coming from Take care!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks Kethry and Tara for the nice responses...James |
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