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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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The poetry in me is silent because of all my pain yet I know that one day soon I'll rise and soar again and string the words together shining like new rain. The poetry in me is sleeping but it will fly again. The poetry in me is sleeping a coma true and strong the hurt I've suffered caused it to withdraw and slide along, the paths within my mind far from the madding throng the poetry in me in darkness will soon burst into song. The poetry in me in darkness will soon seek out the light burst forth in gay abandon banishing all dark night and then to hear the angel's song will be my one delight when my poetry in comeliness has won the victor's fight. The poetry in me is silent there is no need for talk when friends share their thoughts while beside me gently walk and remind me of the poetry they see within my stalk and wait for spring to bloom again with comely voice as vaccined salk. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
your poetry often does encourage yourself and others to heal....it is a much needed "vaccine".....to me..your poetry has always had wings...its not hiding dear poet...its shining brightly for all of us to see! you always do a wonderful job! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Woooohaaaaa! It's so great! Poetry in you is sleeping? You have to got be kidding! How does it sound when it's awake then?  Very beautifully written, I can't even describe how thoroughly I enjoyed this piece... |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Very Lovely Kethry - Lovely words and lovely note of optimism! Deepak |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dawn - thank you for your words of encouragement which are always timely LM - this is what I call a craft poem. it doesn't flow and it took a lot of twisting to come out. My art poems are much smoother I think. But I rave. Why thank you Deepak. I'm so grateful for your encouraging words. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Keth, this flows wonderfully. The poetry that sleeps in you is clearly dreaming beautiful things! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lotharingia - Thank you I am always warmed and encouraged by your pertinent comments. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Kethry, you poetry is not sleeping it fully awake and screaming loud and clear. This was a powerful read, great poem, and yes words do help heal the pain but you have to want the pain to ease. Take care, peace "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Brian, thanks for the comments. I agree about the pain but also know that sometimes the pain is better than the empty void of no feeling, beyond pain. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I believe your words have awakened, Kethry. Your message sings. ...chanson~ |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Delightful read, Kethry...I immersed myself in every syllable. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Chanson and Sonjes - I can't tell you how much I appreciated your comments. They mean a lot. Be well Keth "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Keth, if the poetry was asleep, Id say it woke up roaring with this. Mine was asleep for almost 10 yrs till I found it again here. Thanks for a great piece Richi Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
LOTR, sometimes my poetry sleeps - peacefully. Sometimes it claws its way through the barbed wire fences I build to still its voice. *laughs* Thanks for the encouragement. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Silence is golden and this holds true for this poem a work of art. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thank you so much Rosebud. May I say you have a beautiful name, full of promise and hope. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
This is so true. I love the spark of hope, which is more than a spark. It's shines through the poetry, that I don't find to be so silent. This was really good! Keep up the great work, and continue to win your battle, because I think you can. Keep your head up!! ((HUGS)) "I've fallen asleep, slept so sound. Fallen so fast, I missed the ground" ~Lil OnE~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thank-you Lil OnE that's what I'm doing, trying. That's what I am, trying. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
A most inspiring poem, says i. Very well done. Keep up the good work! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
!!! thank you. Glad you were inspired. I'll be looking for your work now. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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