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Cut Me Down
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Cut Me Down |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
Cut Me Down by J.Sage (8/22/2000) protected by copyright Never did I face a wall of steel Obstacles I could not move Push Push You know I never would've lied to you Anyway The day we died Was it Jesus Was it Moses God, I prayed For a resurrection Instead I got a crucifixion Some days I did it to myself Pain can be good Not this… This fallen building This weak little structure Was not made of steel But you are When you have your way And I can't budge you And I can't pray Enough to bring it back So I lay in debris And I wait for something Anything to happen To cut me down From the cross I bear For you |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
**looks like im officially starting the fan club!**  im assuming this poem is about a lover, but then again many of us often bear crosses for friends and family as well....if you have the strength to carry that cross...then you certainly have the strength to break free. another great read! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
thank you again, Dawn. Yes, my only true love. We are currently apart and may be forever... but he was and probably will be for a while my best muse. He is my breathless beauty. Unfortunately in the 3 years we were together, it is apparent to me now, that he has never learned to breathe. -Jes |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Worry not about copyrights here, my dear. Please leave the paranoia to the experts (me), though with a skill like yours, I can see why you want security. Well, take peace in the fact its false security anyway, the worlds a big enough place that someone could get away with stealing your work…But enough of that depressing reality for now. Back to mind-numbing delirium! Yes, you certainly have talent…this is one of the most…graphic pieces I’ve read (Especially the crucifixion part). I applaud you and bid you welcome to this online mausoleum we call Dark Passions. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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