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A flurry of thoughts...
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A flurry of thoughts... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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============================================== Misery haunts in a painful flurry of thoughts! ============================================== A flurry of thoughts, as I marry myself to the dark thoughts of pain - the thoughts that pull one down, to drown into the slippery womb of a dragon with misery as an adjunct twin, clawing with blue-blooded nails, come to the spiraling head possessed by an equally vagrant shapeless body, of a pathetic form called man. Why? Why? questions haunt till they can haunt no more in the most superfluous floating entities, those, the more enlightened refer to as a brainchild. Why does it have to pain when a child is born? Is it so because of an unwritten code of life, that from bloodied pain new life would result? Why does it have to hurt when a dear one dies? Is it so because we sense a trampling guilt of being unable to do any thing to prevent death? Purposeless questions and purposeless answers. A flurry of thoughts on painful misery haunts. Whom for do I weep? What for do I fight? Life? Where from do I come? How does it matter? Why? Ah! Complexities twinning simplicities of life and death, as being dual states of a life form and everything that exists in between supposed to be fuzzy, useless, pointless, a shot in the dark, just as the purposelessness of inquiring the inquest into reasons behind celebration of life and mourning of this culmination of life! A flurry of thoughts on painful misery haunts. The hunter becomes the hunted as the hunt goes on from a fuzzy yesterday to an aimless today. Misery haunts in a painful flurry of thoughts. ============================================== [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-25-2000).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sudhir, Wow you have my attention on this one, I have had these thoughts before maybe not all in one shot but to answer them would be saying you have the answers and I don't, you would be a fun soul to sit down with and chat yep I think so, awesome thoughts here, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well now! Methinks someone has come across a form which he likes! And which likes him as well. Looks like you not only hit this form again Sudhir, but also matched the current repitition challenge in the English Workshop! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A wonderful flurry of thoughts here Sudhir!! I was mesmerised, and I loved the style and the subtleties.. Namaste my friend, Isis *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sudhir, you've penned this one well as always you do "complexities twinning simplicities of life" this verse grasped my attention! Great read  Coco |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
Misery haunts in a painful flurry of thoughts. Indeed. Very, very well written, Sudhir Iyer. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wow Sudhir, a flurry of thoughts indeed, there is so much here for my tired brain to digest but somethings here just logged in me like hooks, powerful and poem I intend to revist a few times. Just going to cut and paste this poem. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O dear friends, you have honoured me to no end... Thanks a great deal to each one of you... Limited 'net' time today prevents me to post individual messages to each one of you, will do so in the earnest... regards, sudhir |
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