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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Envy is the colour of my true love's smile Filled with hate and bitterness and all consuming guile. Watching for the moment and waiting all the while Until entrapment is complete surrounding me with bile. Malice is the scent in my true love's eyes Keeping up the perfect face, the compleat disguise Until one day when certain swift, I'm blinded and despised Then she spider wraps me up and seals me with her lies. Poverty is the feeling of my true love's heart Poverty of emotion, with no depth to start something she can't finish until I'm on death's cart then bound to her eternal I'll spasm in work of art. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow, that was cool... I liked it a lot, your last 3 poems are sensational! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thank you LM. This piece is not personal it came after I read an article on the black widow who killed five of her boyfriends and had some of them plastered into her art. Yuk!  Thank you also that you think my last three poems have been good.Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
"Then she spider wraps me up and seals me with her lies." "Poverty is the feeling of my true love's heart Poverty of emotion, with no depth to start something she cant finish until i'm on death's cart" Envy, Malice, and Poverty....make for great poetry but not very good lovers...you keep outdoing yourself and im enjoying every moment of it! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thank you Dawn, you are too kind. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Lynne.....Very nice indeed! Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Kethry, You write incredibly well, my friend... regards, sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thank-you Rex and Sudhir, I would say the same of you, for you are my ideals, that I aspire to. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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