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morteZ Junior Member
since 2000-03-16
Posts 17 |
i'm a killer who hasn't been caught each day i murder cigerettes with my lungs my lungs suicide with my tobacco machines i'm fooling myself i am death i am twenty to a box love me, hate me, need me light me, flick me, butt me lets burn all life together who cares if its the end i'll get the end in the end... "Is there another sadness besides that of death? Definitly not, because true sadness is black, devoid of charms, and dreamless." |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Nice use of object here to show your emotions. Good job! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
morteZ, Interesting way to look at smoking. Silent killer that it is, we know how it affects us, but yet we continue to puff. I call it "a slow drawn out suicide." Good peom. Garfield |
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