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morteZ
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-08-22 10:28 PM


I'm running
I'm chasing myself
Yet, I'm running nowhere
down an ever expanding staircase
down yet up it seems
I run past where I started
where am I?
what am I?


"Is there another sadness besides that of death?
Definitly not, because true sadness is black,
devoid of charms, and dreamless."

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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-08-23 06:34 AM


Hmm.... interesting poem (so was the title!)    Know that running feeling... up and down, all around... but standin' still... nice read.
ggrn3
Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.
2 posted 2000-08-24 01:51 PM


morteZ
  I know this feeling also.  Great read.  I've interpreted this one in a couple of ways.  
Again, extraordinary peom.

Garfield

poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
3 posted 2000-08-24 02:38 PM


i think many of us share that same feeling...i liked this alot!
~Dawn

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live

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