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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
this is for greg...my bf...he is so sweet and treats me really good but i wanted to know... ~Love me~ i just wnat love will you hold my hand? just want to be loved will you be my man? stand with me tears and all, will you catch me, if i fall? will you be there for me, when i need you to be? or will you run away, everyday? my pain is my only friend always staying near never coming to and end my pain is always here so cover me in love and hold me tight to you i don't want to feel the pain and yet i always do. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
NIk hon this is so sweet and so sad and so loving all at once...I REALLY LIKE IT A LOT |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
awwwwwwwwwww.....how cute... Dark Star |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Well written piece...I can relate all too well to your words "so cover me in love and hold me tight to you i don't want to feel the pain and yet i always do" Poignant! Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh it's so beautiful and cute... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nik, this is goooood. So full of anxiety and wariness and wanting. Be well Keth. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i like this one...i think that this is the first one i read by you...your boyfriend sounds like he is a good guy... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Nik... I REALLY REALLY liked this!! The line... I don't want to feel the pain, and yet I always do... I feel it, hun. And it hurts, I know. Hang in there, and email me sometime!! (ANYTIME YOU NEED TO TALK) *((HUGS))* "I've fallen asleep, slept so sound. Fallen so fast, I missed the ground" ~Lil OnE~ |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is really sweet, Nik. I'm glad you've got such a lovely bf!  And I hope he's glad about your touching poem! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i want to thank you all for your replies..i'm glad you liked this poem...i don't know if he cares about me but relationships are painful either way....the only thing i regret is that i really have no feelings for him  i don't know why...i thought i did...but no Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nik, First comes the trust, then comes the feelings. Trust me on this. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know that there can be lots of doubts and fears when a new relationship begins...but don't let it get in the way. James |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
thank you all for your replies...i hope you liked this one...he did...but i think that was just cuz he knew it was for him...i dun think he got the whole meaning out it...maybe he will though...who knows? Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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