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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Tearing of the time cloth, Exposes the nakedness of our universe, Foretold in time the words following this verse, Shades of nature, Reflecting back the signs of torture, Left behind are craters of sins. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I really don't know what to say...it's just like, "Wow".  Angel I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
wow....me too...so deep...very good!i like it i do! All i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Indeed very reflective reflections - saying worlds in few words. Well Done Deepak |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I try my best to say the right things. You know keep it short and sweet. Right to the point.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Xeonox, there is beauty in brevity. The images you created are vivid. I enjoyed this ....chanson |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Xeonox, I toss a long stem red rose your way, this is so beautiful and full of wisdom, very much enjoyed, a keeper for sure. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Never been tossed a rose before (even if it is a virtual one), LOL . Thanks Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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