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MiseryDivine
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since 2000-06-13
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Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)

0 posted 2000-08-22 12:07 PM


sowwie...i disapeered for a while...been busy...but
allright....i dont know what in the world i was writing....but what the heck...i wrote it..here goes nothing

nothing
falls from your eyes
nothing
comes out but your lies
you said you loved me
where have you gone?
you promised me forever
yet for some reason...i'm all alone
you play these games
with my heart
i'm not one to fool with
i'll easily tear you apart
i dont need your hatred
i dont need your stupid lies
i know what you want me to do
but guess what...im not gonna cry
i not gonna make a scene
or a big deal about you
just watch me
watch me walk right past you
and into the arms of my deepest desire
a fallen angel with emerald eyes



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since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764
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1 posted 2000-08-22 01:54 AM


This is exactly my situation. Thank you for sharing. Welcome back!!!!!!!!!!!

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-08-22 03:57 PM


Hey! Welcome back!
I liked it so much! Kind of "I will survive" version  
Thanks!

Lil OnE
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since 1999-12-14
Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.
3 posted 2000-08-22 04:06 PM


Welcome back. I loved this one!! Reminds me of one of my older ones... Needless.
It's not as if I spend my days, just sitting by the phone. And if you called, I very well, may pretend I wasn't home. I know you think you've got my heart just hanging on a string, but you should know my life is built on more important things.And if you waved your hand at me as I was passing by, I'd automatically raise my hand and pretend to swat a fly. I know you think you are the best that this world has to give, if that's the case, then hear me say, there are other worlds to live.I don't need you or anyone to make me feel complete, so you should know right from the start, I bow at no mans feet. If you are still desirous to entertain my mind, my heart very well may follow, though it walks a ways behind.
Great poem, and again, welcome back, MiseryDivine!!!  


Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken.
~Lil OnE~



MiseryDivine
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
4 posted 2000-08-22 11:07 PM


oooo...i loved your version lil one! thats awesome! and thanx to xeonex and LM...all of you are the bestest!

All i want in life is to be happy
It seems to me
How messed up things can be
Everytime i get ahead
I fell more dead
~KoRn~~

moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
5 posted 2000-08-23 09:02 AM


but guess what...im not gonna cry

i wish i could just do this everytime somebody plays with my heart. anyway, nice poem, MiseryDivine.

MiseryDivine
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
6 posted 2000-08-23 04:22 PM


thanx moshpit...but they are only words...i wish the same as you

All i want in life is to be happy
It seems to me
How messed up things can be
Everytime i get ahead
I fell more dead
~KoRn~~

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