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Björn
Junior Member

since 2000-02-08

Posts 23
Münster, Germany

0 posted 2000-08-21 08:40 AM

If only I could write those words
to describe these haunting thoughts
to give them names, to break the spell
to find a way out of this hell.

This hell, that now I´m living in
was once a fertile land
where my love and passion grew
and lots of other feelings, too.

This fertile land, fueled by your love
is now all grey and dead
just giving life to these damned thoughts
fighting to become my new lords.

If only I could give them names
to call and draw and bind them here
to find the truth behind the pain
and give myself a chance again.

But still they rule my world
and still they know your name
to call and draw and bind me here
in this place, that i call hell.

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

1 posted 2000-08-21 10:14 AM

Interesting poem

Very good indeed!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2000-08-23 04:49 AM

Sometimes I feel like I have not found the right door to walk thru...where new opportunities and freedom await...like I need to break free from my past to move into my future...James

Björn
Junior Member

since 2000-02-08

Posts 23
Münster, Germany

3 posted 2000-08-23 05:06 AM

taramw: Thanks for your reply! I know there are technical flaws in this one but it seemed i just could´nt find the right words (at least that´s what the poem is about ;-)
Sometimes what goes on inside oneself is all so strange ...

jmlee12345: sometimes I feel like there are no doors at all and the light at the end of the tunnel is merely a mirror, reflecting my own searchlight.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-08-23 10:34 AM

Bjorn you have found the words which describe the way it feels to reel with pain and feel as if your often chained to the devil himself. very good.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-08-24 11:14 AM

The words are there, and you made us feel them. Sorry you are going through this hard time. Take care, and remember that someday there will be something or someone good to take you out of the hell.
Catalinamoon

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

6 posted 2000-08-24 11:48 AM

sometimes I feel like there are no doors at all and the light at the end of the tunnel is merely a mirror, reflecting my own searchlight.

this response to jmlee12345 above

is as wonderful as your poem....may I borrow the refelction of my own searchlight as inspiration?

thank you,
~~soft smiles
Maureen

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