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LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

0 posted 2000-08-21 04:37 AM

*knock*, *knock*

Come in, my friend
I told you that my door
remains unlocked.

Don't ring, my dear
You know it's open wide
for you to walk

Inside, my love
you realise I've waited
for so long...

Don't hesitate, my friend
Though once your heart
I broke

Don't turn away, my dear
this time I'll
make it work

Hello, you're here my love
I almost
gave up hope...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2000-08-21 06:24 AM

Well LM I'm certainly glad you're back at Dark Passions where you belong. Very dark and sibilant piece. Loved it.
Be well
Kethry< !signature-->

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

[This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 08-21-2000).]

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-08-21 09:40 AM

~What a little tale you've told. Cool. And YOU are back as well. Do stay. This one moved right along. Nice expression. Take care LM. *Peace.

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

3 posted 2000-08-21 10:17 AM

Hey, this is superb!

Enjoyed it immensely!

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

4 posted 2000-08-21 03:13 PM

Guys, thanks a lot!
But when exactly was I gone?

I'm here all the time!

I'm glad you liked it, coz I was having second thoughts about it...

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-08-21 03:55 PM

~Perhaps it was I who was away for a few.

. Regardless,...it's a cool write! *Peace.

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

6 posted 2000-08-21 04:50 PM

LM,
as always, wonderful piece. You're back... the joy floods your inner-being, and you are consumed by unexplainable emotions. Then when I stopped and thought about him being back, it scared the hell out of me. I hope all goes well for ya this time

((HUGS))

Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken.
~Lil OnE~

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

7 posted 2000-08-22 08:00 AM

Thanks Lil One

Still it's not like he's BACK back... for now we just made peace, we'll see how that works out later coz he went to the army now for a month...

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