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Storms of my Mind
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Storms of my Mind |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States 
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My life seems to whirl around me like a hurricane... And I am in the middle...the epicenter. I try so hard to decipher what is real and what is fake, but the winds swirl in my mind and I cannot concentrate. My tears they fall like raindrops, cold against my face. It seems I am surrounded by a destiny of fate. I feel so torn and broken with no one to relate, to the feelings I feel inside this hurricane I call my life. My younger years were the worst, that piece of me I've calmed. But my here and now is filled with confusion, I do not understand. I wonder if I ever will have total piece of mind. Or am I destined to a life of storms and delusion. The answers I seek I realize no one can supply. So I will simply wait out the storm in hopes I will survive. "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I love this two lines. The answers I seek I realize no one can supply. So I will simply wait out the storm in hopes I will survive. Awesome work. Great way of using nature as your mode of writing. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
I like the way it came out, powerful and emotional. You've hit a nerve with this one Dee Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
I agree with xeonox, I loved particularly the two last lines. But it's a good poem in whole, thanks for sharing. |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
Xeonox and LM...Thank you for your kind words...I appreciate you kindness.  Richi...What nerve did I hit?  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Dee, I am right there with you. This is a very emotional and expressive poem, and I liked those lines also.. Sandra |
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