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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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i know where you are i know where you aren't there/here i know where i am i know where i'm not here/there i know where you should be i know where you shouldn't be here/there i know where i should be i know where i shouldn't be there/here so why are you? so why am i? there/here who knows? all i know is you are there and i'm not. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 08-20-2000).] |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great poem. Out of the blue, but great. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
a different poem from you Sir Sven, but all the more attractive... the experiment suits you fine, O Knight... regards, sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Here, there and everywhere I hear your voice and... it is good. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven.... You are a master of every style, I can see! I enjoyed reading this very much..it sparked my imagination, and did it with a light touch! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! This is terrific!  And yes, different... but glad it is! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Such confusion in this one Sven. She sounds as confused as you perhaps. I really like the style you use here and the impact of the two simple words you use. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thanks to all. . . xenox. . . surprised you did I? thank you my friend. . . sudhir, just something I was playing around with. . . thanks. . . kethry, thank you. . . but I don't know that hearing my voice is all that good! sunny1, not really a master. . . but I do like to change it everyonce in a while. . . thank you. . . taramw, glad that you like the different form. . . marina, thank you my friend. . . confusion reigns. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Down here Where am at They would say Where you at Sven? monique |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love it, and it's so accurate, the feeling of not knowing where you are, just that you are not where you want to be, by the side of the one that is not there. catalinamoon |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes love the style, hate the feeling. great work bud. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This sounds familiar to me.... me here, you there . . . hmmmm Nice writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
monique. . . I am here. . . where you at?? Thank you my friend. . . catalina, it is confusing. . . thanks. . . Joel, thank you. . . it's not one I'd wish on most people. . . LW, does it?? It really isn't like anything else that I've written. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Confusion reigns Sven, you summed it up perfectly, different indeed, but good work as always!!  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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