Dark Poetry #2 |
The Mist |
darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
The Mist Moving through this haze I’m dazed Blur of what I’m looking at Everything runs together Mixes and makes the murky water That they call my thoughts Incomprehensible words Spoken by one I love I am forced to move on Through the fog that surrounds my life I walk blindly towards the edge My hands out before me Reaching for something to cling to I long for the safety of loving arms So cruelly taken from me Falling forward into the abyss Through the haze The daze The mist |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great way to potray your emotions. I love it. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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boji stone Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62USA |
ohhhhhh now this is good! emotion packed, way to go! *S* bj ~the breath, a mystery of it's own ~~ |
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