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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-08-20 11:09 AM


Knowing everything I am doing
Isn't what I want
What I want is what I fear
Cause what I fear is you
For I fear the one I love
If there was a way to tell you
How I felt
I would try but the words would never come out
For I love and
You will never know

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

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Poetry Princess
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 28
Des Moines, IA
1 posted 2000-08-20 11:12 AM


Definitly sad. But it is honest.  Because we all fear love be it happy or unhappy it will always be feared. Not totally the other person but yet the emotions we feel inside.  But yet we all need to remember that fears overcome are battles won.

Great Poem



POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend?

darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
2 posted 2000-08-20 11:15 AM


I liked it. Sometimes love is scary...but it is also wonderful...I gotta find some love...

Dark Star

Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
3 posted 2000-08-20 01:38 PM


Well I am glad you liked it. Darkstar you will find love!

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

4 posted 2000-08-20 04:15 PM


Neala, Hi  
I really can relate here... it's very true, for me at least... liked it a lot!

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-08-20 07:54 PM


Neala, as always I can relate.  You have a way of putting those thoughts and fears into something that is always a pleasure to read, yet unique.  Good stuff oh sister Goddess!  

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit

Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
6 posted 2000-08-21 09:00 PM


Hey I am glad you liked it. IT is really nice to here that people can relate to what I write.

-Neala
(Godddess of Sadness)

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