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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
unedited...like most of my other stuff...just thought of a title < !signature-->~Aborted after birth~ i was aborted after birth so distorted with no worth compelled by agony living inside of me i was aborted after birth told i had no worth but now i feel much better because of his long letter he wrote it with such words that i had never heard from him that is a man like him i was aborted after birth but now i know my worth i am my own soul have become whole the one you did abort exists no more i am another me the one i really want to be Nikolette Sadness *thinks shes smiling* i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. [This message has been edited by Nikolette Sadness (edited 08-20-2000).] |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
very good work as always hun. i love they way you write. almost like me. *hugs* love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Nik...this one took me from one extreme to the other...you are really growing and its beautiful to see. |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
While i dont know you i must say that this is a very nice poem. Sad theme, but very well captured. Very nice job on this! -"Death is the servant of the righteous." |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
jesse...thanks hun...i'm glad you like it...*bugs hugs* paula...you make me feel so good about everything i write...i'm glad you liked it... !!!....thank you veyr much for your reply...and uhh if you see this check your email... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Even the most unwanted of us are worthy of love....VERY good poem!! Thanx!! Well done. Click |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey Hon  So you won't get it the wrong way this time ... I Really(!) liked this poem , really... I'm glad you're in a good mood, that's the best and the only way to survive this (as, I think, Kethry said it but I sometimes dissagree) ongoing hell we must endure |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful expression from your heart...lets smile together...James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful expression here hon, we all have self worth, it is sad, when for whatever reason, we forget for a while. Glad you were reminded and remembered!! Good stuff, and try not to forget again *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Yes Nikolette,...I have to agree,...try not to forget again. heehe. I truly admire the way this one was written. Very well done here. Strong feelings in this. Take care now. *Peace. |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Strong and beautiful as always. I really like your work, it's good for the heart. Looking forward to each new posting. Richi Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nik loved this, it was powerful, victorious almost jubilant.  LM not even small slivers of sunlight hmmmm. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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