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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Entombed in this meaningless burial chamber, Hope a faded memory, Laughter a long forgotten joy, Blue eyes masked with amber. This mausoleum I call my life, A monument built for the light, I live, and in a sense I died for it, And now I've lost the fight. Little glimpses, reminders of the happiness I seek, Talisman adorn my world, For it seems they are all I have to hold onto.. Now this crypt reeks of emotional dischord. Friends peer in and quickly leave, They don't wish to be caught in the mire too, They offer a sacrifice to the fallen, Then disappear for there is nothing they can do. My burial chamber, My home of unrest, Too weak to conquer, If put to the test. Nothing to laugh about, Nothing to look forward to, Nothing to hope for, What else am I meant to do? My spirit flagging, I grow weary of this arduous existance, How many more punishments must one endure? I've slowly lost my resistance. So leave some flowers at this, my memorial, Mourn the loving soul that has passed away, Now it's merely a hollow shell, And I have nothing more to say............ < !signature--> *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 08-19-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Isis sorry that you are feeling so blue right now...I am leaving a dozen red roses at your memorial...ha..ha.. Hold on to your dreams hon...keep them living in your heart...someday all your dreams will come true...and mine also I hope..ha..ha..but with sincerity..James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Not blue James, just assessing and generalising my life at present LOL Thanks for the flowers, they are so beautiful.. We'll get there, both of us, in the end, I know.. Thanks hon  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this depiction, Isis, especially the part about the friends who come and leave quickly so they don't have to absorb the misery. Sorry things are going like this for you now, but with your determination and loving heart, you will be ok. More than ok. I know that somehow. Peace. Sandra Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, you know that it's always darkest. . . this was beauiful my friend. . . as always. . . Good to see you back by the way!!!  -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Someone once told me to rejoyce when youve hit bottom, because the only way to go from there is up. All im saying is to keep strong is all. Very nice poem as well. -"Death is the servant of the righteous." |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks guys I always keep trying and I always have hope, the only way IS up..... Glad you enjoyed the read! *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
No kid it can always get darker, I have seen it and you have to. but that isn’t in the cards for you, you are a lighthouse in the storm kid, keep shining. love ya, Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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