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boji stone
Member

since 2000-08-13

Posts 62
USA

0 posted 2000-08-19 06:17 PM

Yesterday my name
     is practical woman
     who gets things done.
     In my dream
     I am a delicate silver chain
     lying soft
     against my breast,
     They call me beautiful,
     Today I am the flitter
     of
     abandoned chatter
     dancing
     Tomorrow, I'll be
     An azure moon levitating,
     The day after, the day after,
     I'll be
     children's laughter,
     in the soothing sound
     of Summer rain.

~the breath, a mystery
of it's own ~~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-08-19 09:54 PM

This is simply a beautiful poem.
You've taken nature and capsulated it in yesterday, today and tomorrow. I love it. I also like the way you drew a wonderful picture of how every woman feels..we all feel there are many parts to us, for different times. Good work, look forward to reading more from you.

Kathleen

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-08-19 10:37 PM

What a great expression of life, the one most woman are stuck in.

This is the one I want to be tomorrow..
"Tomorrow, I'll be
An azure moon levitating,"

That has such a peaceful, lovely sound to it.
Take care.
catalinamoon

Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord Byron

Janie
Member

since 2000-08-13

Posts 158

3 posted 2000-08-20 01:22 AM

Who I am and who I want to be/
Who you see and who I really am are different...
We are so very complex aren't we.
Written beautifully!

Someone created an ad once for women's perfume that exemplified women's many facets that started like this:
"I can bring home the bacon, fry it up in a pan and never, never, never, let you forget you're a man..." (not pretty like you said it)< !signature-->

[This message has been edited by Janie (edited 08-20-2000).]

boji stone
Member

since 2000-08-13

Posts 62
USA

4 posted 2000-08-20 08:09 AM

Irish Rose, CatalinaMoon, Janie

thank you all very much,
for reading and feeling
the words ~~ I do appreciate
the responses very much!

*S*
bjstone

~the breath, a mystery
of it's own ~~

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