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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Please look at me and say I'm sweet Please look at me and say I'm pretty Please look at me and say you love me Please look at me and say you care Just look at me and say you need me When I look at you I know I do I know I want you I need you I love you I care Hold me and never let me go again Just like all the others did after a while When I finally had some rest don't let me fall Down "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Virgin, you are pretty and sweet and your poetry rocks. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hehe....yeah just want someone right know who really means it or so, and won't let me down....that would be nice sometime....I guess... Love, Virgin Suïcide "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Hey! Nice poem, very sad though. Keep up the good work!  -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Thanks to both of you... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Wow!! Good write!!! I liked how it looked and read.....I really like what it says to me...I feel it. Thanks to you!! Click |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
I really liked it...I felt like that so many times that I lost count... Dark Star |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
I am with all the others on this one. I felt it. It hit me, because I feel the same. And it was an awesome poem. ((HUGS)) Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Please look at me and notice my existance... I know what it's like, touched me deep inside.  |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Thank you guys again (hehe...)! I really appreciate all your comments and your loving words and I'm glad that I've finaly let others read my "poetry"... love, Virgin Suïcide...  "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Very strong piece! Went through most of my life feeling this way. Thanks : ) Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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