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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I can feel your eye's touch me in the night I can sense your shadow flickering in the candlelight I listen to your sighs' upon my windowpane While you seduce my thought's in the drizzle of the rain Why do you watch me? In the darkness from afar Do you like the way I harmonize? to the strings'of moonlight guitars' Why do I burn a candle every night? Maybe, it is your invitation to watch wax drip slowly with delight Do you know I can feel you? as I flaunt my silhouette for you In the night, in the darkness through veins' of candlelight blue |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This was very nice, Victoria. Kathleen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely, Victoria. I have these thoughts of an absent lover, all the time. Very nicely expressed. catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I am reading your tender words flickering in the candlelight...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I appreciate your comments, Irish Rose, catalinamoon and jmlee. Thank you  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Oh, yes do that silhouette dance for me please....  Parker |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Lovely poem Victoria "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Parker and Tara. I am so glad you enjoyed. |
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