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Dark Poetry #2

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Chained2illusions
Junior Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 45
Elyria, Oh *at the moment*

0 posted 2000-08-19 10:30 AM

Crucified,
Hanging from the chains,
swinging endless under the sea of obsidian lights.

Stones bruising
twisting and dripping crimson drops.

Dripping.

Taste the honey slipping,
taken without asking,

The longing biting her tongue.

The flies on her shoulders,
whispering
tauntingly,

            "You are everyone else's ,
             someday, become your own."zzzzzzzzz

Crucified,
hanging from the chains,
Slender digits sliding against the cool steel.

             "Excuse me,
              have you seen the walrus yet?"
              He promised me the world in an
              oyster shell,
              Too bad I dont like seafood."

Crucified,
hanging from the chains,
the little white rabbit running by...
            "You're late,
             He'll have your head,
             He'll have your life"

Swinging under the obsidian lights...
            "He already has"

demoninlove
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 211
Dehradun

1 posted 2000-08-20 02:18 AM

Very intense - deep and thought provoking.
Deepak

!!!
Member

since 2000-08-12

Posts 137
VA (U.S.A)

2 posted 2000-08-20 02:36 AM

This IS very deep. Well written, and great visualization.

-"Death is the servant of the righteous."

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