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Poetry Princess
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 28
Des Moines, IA

0 posted 2000-08-19 04:22 AM


Can't Make You Love Me

My love for you keeps growing stronger
Now I know I can be with you no longer
I can't take the pain I will soon feel inside
It is time for me to run and hide
I don't want to make you mad
But I can no longer feel this sad
I can see my heart beginning to brake
And that is something I just can't take
You were everything I wanted in a man
But I feel I have done all that I can
I thought I could make you see
But now I know I can't make you love me



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LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

1 posted 2000-08-19 06:27 AM


Oh... it's so beautiful and sad...
The worse thing is when you feel helpless and have no hope for your loved one to love you back... It really hits home for me.
Thanks for sharing, I wish you the best of luck.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-08-19 08:57 AM


I was just talking to a friend of mine about this tonight...I told her I had a dream to fall in love with a woman and for her to fall in love with me...I told her even if she didn't fall in love with me my dream would live on and someday I would find a match...James
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

3 posted 2000-08-19 09:32 AM


Ohhhh... sad... but written well  
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