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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
*watches what she posts* this is an idea i got from the freshmen at my high school...hmmmm but when you read it i don't think you will see that... ~Placement Anew~ they've heard about a place so new they come to seek if they only knew what they'd find they'd run and hide a place to start a life so clean a place to live their biggest dreams then they'll run away and never play because everyday paranoia stays and with this fear i'll make it clear this place so dear is my worst fear Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
I like it...I already read it in your notebook...still very cool...and of course you gotta watch what you post....there are 8 year olds that could get the wrong idea and we could be making them bad....very bad...*snickers* Dark Star |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I like it! Thanx. Click |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
And I'm sure that this poem and the comments are things which 8 year olds will understand completely. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I remember that feeling. A horrid thing, school. Don't miss it at all.  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Poetry Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28Des Moines, IA |
Very good poem although it could be taken in many different ways which actually is a cool thing to those of us who understand it. |
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