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Nikolette Sadness
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 337
port richey fl.

0 posted 2000-08-18 05:21 PM


*watches what she posts* this is an idea i got from the freshmen at my high school...hmmmm but when you read it i don't think you will see that...

~Placement Anew~

they've heard about
a place so new
they come to seek
if they only knew
what they'd find
they'd run and hide
a place to start
a life so clean
a place to live
their biggest dreams
then they'll run away
and never play
because everyday
paranoia stays
and with this fear
i'll make it clear
this place so dear
is my worst fear

Nikolette Sadness


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

© Copyright 2000 Nicole Crisp - All Rights Reserved
darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
1 posted 2000-08-18 07:05 PM


I like it...I already read it in your notebook...still very cool...and of course you gotta watch what you post....there are 8 year olds that could get the wrong idea and we could be making them bad....very bad...*snickers*

Dark Star

Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
2 posted 2000-08-18 07:54 PM


I like it!
   Thanx.

Click


Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
3 posted 2000-08-19 02:24 AM


And I'm sure that this poem and the comments are things which 8 year olds will understand completely.
lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
4 posted 2000-08-19 04:19 AM


I remember that feeling. A horrid thing, school. Don't miss it at all.  

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



Poetry Princess
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 28
Des Moines, IA
5 posted 2000-08-19 04:25 AM


Very good poem although it could be taken in many different ways which actually is a cool thing to those of us who understand it.
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