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Cerenity
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0 posted 2000-08-19 12:50 PM


Little Spirit Ride With Me


Ride the air currents with me spread your wings
little spirit, come see the world not as I did
but free of the chains that manifest as life goes on.
Open your eyes take in the beauty of this world
before it is taken away from you.

See what man has not yet touched, smell the
freshness he has not yet poisoned,
hear natures melody’s before they are cut off.

Spread your wings little spirit ride the air currents with me.

Understand the wisdom I am about to impart
to you, do not forsake your own heart
listen to its desires and act upon them. Let no
one change the course in life you choose,
follow it with pride and dignity.

Listen to me little spirit do not let those you love
kill your every dream, desires, your hopes,
and most of all your spirit.

Can you feel the freshness of the wind as it passes
you, giving your body a slight chill but
still being refreshing, that is how life should be
full of experiences, some hot making the
pulse race and some cold stopping your heart
just for a moment but then resuming its
beat, this is how your ride through life should be.


Little spirit please remember all I have imparted
to you, put this free girt of wisdom in your
heart for safe keeping and do not ever loose
sight of the beauty you have been shown for life
can be what you make it, its all up to you.

Come little spirit ride with me one last time to
Luna's realm and then home sweet home we shall go,
you and I, little spirit.


By, Cerenity



"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2000-08-19 11:24 PM


Cerenity, this made me think of things I would want to say to my little granddaughter. I don't know who you meant it for, but what a wonderful gift.
Take care.
Sandra


Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord Byron

Janie
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since 2000-08-13
Posts 158

2 posted 2000-08-20 01:57 AM


I liked the ride! In the beginning I thought this was going to be an upbeat version of Dickinson's, A Christmas Carol. I see this isn't where you went, your story is lite, airy, modern and good.

Janie


Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2000-08-20 09:23 AM


Good morning

Sandra and Janie

This poem is my way of telling yonger souls that the world can be a very harsh place, but if they listen to thier hearts and good judgement there could be a good chance they will enjoy life and not do what I did and let others run thier lives. Thank you so much for your kind replys.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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