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Wren
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 312


0 posted 2000-08-17 08:54 PM



My heart
Keeps my blood running rich and pure
Kisses my skin from the inside
Movements of life inside me
Waiting to burst forth

Your heart
Keeps your blood running rich and pure
Kisses your skin from the inside
Movements of life inside you
Waiting to burst forth

Together
We lie
Head to head
Body to body
Feeling
Our veins fuse
To become one path
We tangle our own knot

This must be love

© Copyright 2000 Wren - All Rights Reserved
taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-08-17 09:18 PM


Woah!   Yep - nice read!!  A great way of putting it.
lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
2 posted 2000-08-19 04:25 AM


Wren, I love this. That's just what it feels like!
WoWee!
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Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo




[This message has been edited by lotharingia (edited 08-19-2000).]

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

3 posted 2000-08-19 06:22 AM


Ohhhh... This is beautiful.
A new definition of Love...

catalinamoon
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Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2000-08-19 11:20 PM


Wren, I think it must be! Awesome writing.
catalinamoon

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