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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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(i hope that i do not get inot trouble for cross-posting this, but it seemed to fit in both places...if I have done wrong, I apologize) Time swallows with a shallow moan, first flesh, then dust and bone devouring all humanity held upon the loving hands of beauty ever so slow time destroys with selfish swallow. "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
It does indeed! Very well expressed ali!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
you are so right great job Blue |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very powerful words. Take care. cat... Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Interesting personification of time! Good one! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Sounds very interesting..have to read it again. Good Job!  |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ohhh... deep indeed... but very good! |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I thank you all for your kind words... once in a while....just one in a while, I can be "deep"... : }~ Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
You're right ali, time swallows unless you want it to, then it sidesteps, creeps, and sidles and you're stuck in it. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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