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sash
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 125


0 posted 2000-08-17 01:34 AM




Love abounds..
Fresh,
Clean,
New,
Like it was before..
Like it should feel..
Forever.

Timeless passages..
A heart
Undaunted,
Still caressed
By the flailing gifts
Bestowed upon
an undying romantic.

But for only
a refreshing, amorous
taste
of what the soul needs
feed upon.



© Copyright 2000 sash - All Rights Reserved
Beenie
Junior Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 27
WVa
1 posted 2000-08-17 01:53 AM


I am finally here,my friend. What can I say but, wow.... you really know how to hit one home don't you?!

Beenie        

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-08-17 01:35 PM


I love this. "what the soul needs feed upon"
Beautifully stated.
cat...

Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord Byron

Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
3 posted 2000-08-17 06:30 PM


Good poem!
   "You can't always get what ya want.."  Mick

Click


Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

4 posted 2000-08-17 07:39 PM


Sparsely put but beautiful!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

sash
Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

5 posted 2000-08-18 06:09 PM



Thanks to everyone for the kind replys. I am struggling with the applcation, but I have the suffering part down-pat!! LOL

       ~Sash~

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