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I Don' t Know.... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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~~~ I don't know what to do about you I don't want you telling me I have to make choices I want you telling me you love me Love me enough that the fears of a choice will go away That the chances we take will be worth the effort I want to know that you will hold me in your arms and your body will "still" my heart, until our rhythms are in sync That each breath you take is one I give to you and each sigh comes from witholding the feel as long as possible, before allowing it to escape and return to me I want to know that no matter what, you will always love me And that you too, have the same fears, but think "we" are worth the risk I need to know that our world will be protected by our love and you and I will hold true to change and in every way possible, will allow the growth and space needed to make ours an "everlasting" one I love you, and know that you love me but... I don't know what to do about you ~~~ M 8*2k [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-16-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen, I want to know all those things to. You always write my feelings. This journey is so hard sometime. As always, you write with emotion and style. cat.. Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
ahhhh, yes, the questions of love... so heartfelt and all have them at one time or another... this reminds me of a card that one would give to their love... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Cat..I appreciate your words, greatly...I guess it comes from within my heart and mind because truly... I have no idea what I am planning to write when I start...and when completed and I read aloud for the final time...I wonder who it was that wrote those thoughts...couldn't be me... ~~soft smile Maureen * maybe I have been reincarnated and someone else is living within me |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
So beautiful and heartfelt, a very touching call for help I must say... It will all work out my dear, just stay true to your heart  HugzStrive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
a-alibaster hmm well maybe I can make a living writing cards....although there are so many out there already ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen I don't know what to do I see what you write and it makes me so blue For my poetry's trite in comparison to you. In passion's pen, you're a delight so I bow to the master and wish you goodnight.  Be well Lynne. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
ThUnDeRkYsS you storm my heart with your responses...do you know that? ~~soft hugs M |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Lynne,no one's poetry is ever trite if it is originating from the heart...and what some may enjoy another may not..so there is always someone out there who will like what's written ~~soft thanks for the very kind and lovely responses... {{Hugs}} Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-18-2000).] |
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