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Be There for Me
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Be There for Me |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Be There for Me Pain I cannot stand Come and hold my hand Need you there for me Is that something you can't see? From this life unto the next I will try and do my best But my best isnt't good enough Which makes it kind of rough What you say and what you do, I am there for you Please be there for me too |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
ok...no one's there for me... |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
The pain I cannot stand... to give the one you love your heart, only to have them tear it apart, piece by piece, and when there's nothing left, throw it back at you and walk away like nothing ever happened. I really liked this one. "I will try and do my best, but my best isn't good enough" I love that line, and hate it at the same time. Nothing I ever do is good enough... Great job capturing this... We're here for you, darkstar. Keep up the great work!!  ((HUGS)) Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Jup, we'll always be there! and get you through these times... love, Virgin Suïcide... forgot to mention, great poem!! "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
I'm here for you Liked your poem, thanks for your replies. Ciao!  |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Thanks everybody... Dark Star |
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