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My Souls Hunger Pains
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My Souls Hunger Pains |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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My Souls Hunger Pains I am but a speck of sand on the scales of time yet supposedly have value and merit, I find this too not weigh right in my mind. I alone hear my souls out cries of pain and despair, but nobody else can hear my pleas. I alone see and understand how this world effects me, but nobody else even tries to understand. I alone cast no measurable shadow upon this earth for if I did, I would see some measurable advancement in my life. Others say you have achieved much, your value is priceless, but I am not convinced my soul does not feel satisfied. I find my value lost to me, and do not know were to look for it. There are those that pass me in time and think they have left a mark for me to dwell upon or to reach for, but I of yet have not found one that did not hurt the essence of me, these souls that claim to have it all. There’s claim that happiness is a real prospect and everybody is granted some portion. There must be something im missing, or do not understand, for I truly wish for more than this. Were do I go or whom do I speak to be dealt my fair share so my souls hunger pains may diminish. By. Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
Cerenity, i really like your poem. It has a theme i sometimes pursue when writing. But, well, noone could say it better than your first stanza. Just beautiful. I hope your hunger pains cease, and that you are fed soon. ilph. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, I know this feeling. Please know that you are very valuable. It sounds like you are searching for yourself, as I am. I hope you can find what you need, its no easy task. Lovely poem. Sandra Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Seventh stanza... "There are those that pass me in time and think..." LOVED IT!!! I, also, am searching for myself. I really enjoied this poem. Keep it up! Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
this was very well written. I enjoyed reading every stanza. Keep up the good work! -"!!!" |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
lovely.. there is beauty in sadness, after all. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thank you so much for all of your kind words in reguards to this poem, I did not feel good about posting it because it is depressing, in the world you for the most part can not show how you feel or at least around here but some times I feel like my poetry that mostly is posted in open is a fabrication or not suited at the time because of how I feel. Searching what a BIG word the thing I find the hardest is that do we ever get through with this finding our selves or knowing what we want are do we just get tierd ? and then just settle for what we have gained from that point? anyway thank you again and most of you I have to welcome to passions it is so nice to have you here and I will look for your poetry as well, be seeing you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
sometimes all the filling in the world doesn't cure the hunger pains. This is beautifully written And I CAN relate so well to it. |
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the applicant New Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 8england |
~cerenity, wow. this poem is fantastic. my eyes grew wider with every stanza. your command of language seems to be so natural. i envy this in you, but also, and most prodominently, admire this. 'but I of yet have not found one that did not hurt the essence of me, these souls that claim to have it all.' once agin, wow. "Is my life so intriguing? Is it for this you widen your eye-rings?" ~sylvia plath~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
WOW cerenity a powerfully written poem very intense. Excellent breathtaking....I hope that this feeling passes, I know it well, big hug.  "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thank you for such loving words, Rosebud thank you, I know alot of souls have been here im glad you are not. Applicant, First welcome to passions, secondly thank you so much for your loving reply, hope to see more of you. Brian my friend thank you for the hug I needed that so muches. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Soul searching *sigh*. We all must do it from time to time, so we can better ourselves emotionally. I too, have done my share of searching, it hurts but hopefully from it comes so more good. Those that fail to understand or see the 'real' you aren't worth wasting your time on..they probably haven't even searched for themselves. I can read enough between the lines to see you are a person of worth, someone I'd happily get to know. I think you need a *hug* and some positive reinforcement hon. An easy little thing to do is 10 minutes each morning before work or your day etc. think about yourself, focus on yourself and list some good attributes about you, find a few bad ones, and try to make amends.... Your journey has only begun - good luck and I hope you find your peace and realise just how special you are  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit |
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