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Boy Lost |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Boy lost Congratulations You’re a mommy You’re a daddy It’s a baby boy Baby boy cries Frustration Daddy takes to drinking Mommy’s heart is sinking I’ll be the man thinks little boy Little boy tries Incrimination Daddy you did this to me Mommy you should have left and be free I’ll block this out says teenage boy Teenage boy buys Capitulation Dad I can’t stand the site of you Mom I’m sorry for what I’m about to do I can’t live with what I’ve become Young man dies |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ohhh goodness ... sooo sad  You've written this very well kat... certainly gave me goosebumps. Take care. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is excellent. The matter of fact style makes it all the more effective! V. well done! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
a great one, about how some parents can be... and how they can ruin the lives of their kids...very true... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kat, there was never a truer word spoken than in this poem. Thanks for not being indifferent about posting this poem Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Your words are true...reality can really sting...great piece...beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
taramw: Thanks! lotharingia: Thanks for the compliment! Virgin Suicide: Yes, very true. Thanks! Kethry: You're welcome and thanks! Lady Lost: Thanks!  kat |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Very true...I know how parents can treat their kids badly. I really liked it. Dark Star |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
darkstar: Yes they can. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks! kat |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Kat, I have a friend who lost her son in the same way and if you listen to her she doesn't even really know why he did it and would never take even a fraction of the blame in her case though it is just a repeat of what she went through as a child but that does not make it any easyer or better. You caught the true reality to this subject wonderful. Thanks, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Cerenity: I'm glad you felt I caught the true reality of this subject. I'm sorry to hear about your friend. It's sad that anyone has to feel pain like that. Thanks for responding and your compliment. kat |
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